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Be our guest (read description) by toonmass07 Be our guest (read description) by toonmass07
After the events of No Such Luck, we see Lincoln sitting on his bed reading comics feeling upset, until he notices the audience.

Lincoln: Oh hey. You may be wondering why I feel upset, well I just wanted time to myself, so I lied that I had bad luck, but then things got out of hand. I got locked out of the house, my furniture was almost sold, and the only way to prove I have no bad luck was to wear a stupid squirrel suit. And now I have to wear it for the rest of my life just to hide my fake bad luck.

Lincoln started feeling sad and could almost feel a tear coming.

Lincoln: Why can't things just go my way?

Without Lincoln's knowing, he didn't realize that his sisters were hearing him through his door.
Lori: Wow, we really messed up.
Luan: Yeah we made Lincoln feel lonely and sad.
Lana: Is there a way we can fix it?
Lola: We can just tell him sorry.
Luna: No dude, we've done that to many times, we got to think of another way.
The sisters thinked of a way of how to apologize to Lincoln and they got a couple of ideas.
Lola: We can sing him a song
Leni: We can cook him something nice
Lynn: No we should do cool tricks for him.
Luna: Dudes, I think I know how we can do all of that.

Later on that night Lincoln was still in his room reading a comic of Ace Savvy, once again all alone. The silence broke when his door was knocking.
Lana: Lincoln dinners ready!
Lincoln: Okay let me get my squirrel suit on.
Lana: Don't wear the squirrel suit
Lincoln: What? But my "bad luck" might affect you guys.
Lana: Nevermind about that just come down stairs.
Lincoln: Okay.
Lincoln came out of his room and down the stairs still feeling upset. When he got to the dining room table no one was there, just a table and one chair.
Lincoln: Guys if you wanted me to wear the squirrel suit you could have just asked!
No response.
Lincoln: Looks like I'm lonely once again.
All seemed quiet until the lights when out and music started to play, scaring Lincoln a little bit.
Lincoln: Guys what's going on!?!
Lincoln was wondering what was happening, until a light lit up showing Luna standing on the table.

Luna: Wassup bro, it is with deepest pride and greatest pleasure that we welcome you tonight. And now we invite you to relax, as we pull up a chair, as the Loud House proudly presents...

Lucy is seen playing a piano.

Luna: ...your dinner.

Luna: Be our guest
Be our guest
Put our service to the test
Tie your napkin 'round your neck, bro
And we provide the rest
Enjoy food
It's taste great
Why, were siblings after all
Try the grey stuff, it's delicious
Don't believe me? Ask the others
We can sing
We can dance
After all, Bro, were the best
And a dinner here is never second best
Go on, unfold your menu
Take a glance and then you'll
Be our guest
Be our guest
Be our guest

Luna: Peanut butter
Sauerkraut
It's your favorite, is it not
We'll prepare and serve with flair
A culinary cabaret
You're alone
And you're scared
But the banquet's all prepared
No one's gloomy or complaining
While the flatware's entertaining
Luan tells jokes
Lynn does tricks
And I jam out with my axe
Loud sisters: And it's all in perfect taste that you can bet
Luna: Come on and lift your glass
You've won your own free pass
To be our guest
If you're stressed
It's fine dining we suggest
Be our guest
Be our guest
Be our guest

Luna: Life is so boring
Without a bro to hang out with
He's not whole without a soul to wait upon
Ah, those good old days when we would hang out
Suddenly those good old days were gone
Too long we've been lonely
Needing someone to be with
Needing exercise, a chance to show our skills
Most days we just lay around bored
Flabby, fat and lazy
You walked in and now we're happy!

Leni: It's our bro
It's our bro
Sakes alive, well I'll be blessed
Drinks's been poured and thank the Lord
I've had the napkins freshly pressed
With dessert
He'll want tea
And that's literally fine with me
While the cups do their soft shoeing
I'll be ready, and look pretty
I'll look great
Piping hot
OMG! Is that a spot?
Clean it up! We want our brother impressed
We've got a lot to do
Is it one lump or two
For you, our guest

Loud sisters: He's our guest

Leni: He's our guest

Loud sisters: He's our guest

Loud sisters: Be our guest
Be our guest
Our command is your request
Your the greatest bro we'll ever have
And we're obsessed
You're unique
You're so smart
Yes, indeed, you're the best
While the candlelight's still glowing
Let us help you
We'll keep going

Luna and Loud sisters: Course by course
One by one
'Til you shout,
Enough, I'm done
Then we'll sing you off to sleep as you digest
Tonight you'll prop your feet up
But for now, let's eat up
Be our guest
Be our guest
Be our guest
Please, be our guuuuuueeeeeeeeest!

Lincoln then starts clapping his hands with a smile on his face.

Lincoln: WOW THAT WAS AWESOME!!!
Luna: Glad you liked it bro, it's our way of saying sorry for the way we've been treating you for the past few days.
Lynn: Do you forgive us?
This sisters had worried looks on their face.
Lincoln: Well you guys did locked me out of the house and left me alone in the backyard in the night, but at least you guys showed me that you care about me and that you regret the decision you made.

Lincoln: So yes I forgive you guys and I wouldn't trade you all for the world.

The sisters all hug Lincoln

Loud sisters: Awe thanks Lincoln.
Lincoln: Now come on let's eat!

And for the rest of the night the Loud siblings were all eating and spending time with each other as a perfect family.


Hope you liked that alternate ending for No Such Luck. You weren't expecting that weren't you? This was inspired when I watched the live action remake I feel Beauty and the Beast. 10/10 best remake. My favorite part was Be our guest which is what inspired me to do this.

Song from live action: youtu.be/9qQ__xrUF3Y

The Loud House is owned by Nickelodeon
Beauty and the Beast is owned by Disney
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carlitosbug Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2017
Did Lily sing "Be Our Guest" with the other Loud sisters?
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Kermitthefrog223456 Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2017
It's nice of them to invite them to be their guest even if they're immune to the effects of the sorceress's spell.
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TXToonGuy1037 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2017  Student General Artist
Great tribute to one of my favorite songs by Alan Menken/Howard Ashman!! :D :D
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carlitosbug Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2017
By the way, are you sure if Lily sang "Be Our Guest" with Luna and the other Loud sisters?
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ItsAllPossible Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2017
Verrry Nice! 
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LunarLeaf100 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i love it!!
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MrToon1999 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2017
What's this? A sequel fanfiction that isn't mean-spirited, doesn't villainize the sisters AND ends with a good ending for everyone?

What a Miracle!!!
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the01angel Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2017  Student Digital Artist
Cute story with a perfect picture to match! Kao emoji  (yay smile-02) 
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WickidlyStrange13 Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2017  Student Digital Artist
Awesome art! I feel bad for Lincoln but the sisters cheer him up! :)
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carlitosbug Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2017
Is Lily shown singing "Be Our Guest" with Lori, Leni, Luna, Luan, Lynn, Lucy, Lola, Lana, and Lisa?
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